G’day everyone! This is week three for me and gee that’s come along quickly.
This six again follows on immediately from last week’s six and starts to reveal a little more of our protagonist’s story…
I don’t know. I’ve tried talking to my video camera but it just stared at me. Didn’t offer sympathy. Didn’t give me any advice, didn’t convince me everything was going to be OK.
Then again neither did this diary when I started writing on the page of June 21. Maybe that’s why I grabbed a handful of pages, ripped them out and tossed them into the air like autumn leaves in a park, but with frustration instead of cheer.
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Nice imagery. Hopefully the pages were taken from the days prior to June 21 or there’ll be a problem when it comes time to fill those pages 🙂
Err… yes, I must check that that’s all in order and when it all comes together. 🙂
I LOVE the visual of the paper falling like leaves and the contrast of emotion. You definitely have my attention!
Each week I consider putting up 6 from a different story, someone wants to read more of this one! I love these sorts of problems! 🙂
Lovely details. That is a problem with inanimate objects, they don’t offer comfort. I feel for the guy.
Yes. You’ll have to watch this space to find out why. Or maybe I’ll skip that bit in 6SS so you’ll have to buy the book! Sneak peek at next week: I reveal the narrator’s gender. 😉
I love the idea of the video camera just staring back. Great six; can’t wait to read more!
Thanks Karen. My arm has been twisted. There will be more. 🙂
Excellent imagery, and really pulled me in. Great six.
Thanks Rae. 🙂
Love the way you showed the characters frustration. Excellent job! I’m looking forward to reading more.
Thanks Jess. Next week, same place. 😉
Thoughts scattered like leaves. Nice image.
Thanks Elin. 🙂
Very nice conveying the frustration. As already noted, the pages as leaves was creative. I went back and read your previous sixes, and I’ll be back for more!
Thanks Maddie. Looks like I’m committed now. Cheers! 🙂
I like the visual of the pages being ripped and tossed. Adds a bit of action to the intrigue here!
Glad you like it Amy. 🙂
An intriguing six. I can feel the narrator’s frustration at his plight. The labels say young adult, so this is especially realistic. I’m off to try to find the last six as I want to read a little bit more. *Sigh* – I try to control my greed, but…
Cheers, Lynette. I always aim for realism. Seems the courses have paid off! Note to self: Add better links to previous related sixes next time. 🙂